My oral presentation

Writing:

First I'm going to my grandfather's house. There I did my summer homework. We also went to the public pool. We stayed in my grandfather's house of one of July.

Second I went to Andorra with my cousins. There we went to Caldea. It was a relax. There we went to visitAndorra ski slopes without snow. Thaa day we united racing cars. After that we went celebrate my Saint Day.

And the end we went back in August. But the last two weeks I was in Campllong. And the three days, WE returner to celebrate my birthday. And since then we bought of material for school.

MY OBSERVATION:

- Did you use any resources?

Nomany

- Did you look at your audience most of the time?

Not because I got more nervous.

- Did you read from your notes?

Yes, very much.

- Did you do any gestures/movement to hold the attention of your audience?

No much.

- Did you organize your ideas in order of importance?

No, but your order  are in order of apperence.

- Did you use discourse markers to to make your ideas more clear?

(First, then, secondly,on the one hand, on the other hand,

finally..)

Yes, but I don't use in presentation,

Did you introduce interesting NEW information to your audience?

No

- Did you look up information/facts/ideas in the internet, books..?

No

was your information more superficial or more detailed, and original?

simple.

- Did you check your grammar?(verbs, word order)

- Did you use rich vocabulary looking up the dictionary?

(synonyms, new words, expressions..)

Yes becouse not repit of work in one sentance

- Did you use  fillers?(well, you know, for example, one second..)

I not use

- Did you know how to pronounce all your words?

Yes becouse simple.

- Did you check the pronunciation with a dictionary, a classmate or the teacher?

No don't check